Great job with your zine! So many things about it work well. Your layout is clean and organized and its simplicity is striking.
One thing to work on for future design research is your critical analysis. Right now you are telling me about the products, but not really analyzing whether or not you think they will work well and why. Try to focus on this in the future.
Your layout is really nice! I have been flipping through some of your peer's blogs and yours stands out. I agree with what suzanne said about the clean organization. I can't read the text that you have put in, but from a visual standpoint I think that you are headed in the right direction!
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Great job with your zine! So many things about it work well. Your layout is clean and organized and its simplicity is striking.
One thing to work on for future design research is your critical analysis. Right now you are telling me about the products, but not really analyzing whether or not you think they will work well and why. Try to focus on this in the future.
Your layout is really nice! I have been flipping through some of your peer's blogs and yours stands out. I agree with what suzanne said about the clean organization. I can't read the text that you have put in, but from a visual standpoint I think that you are headed in the right direction!
~erin
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